Monday, May 18, 2015

5sc week 5

My favourite coulour is blue because it is the coulour of the sea. My favourite coulour is blue because it the sky. My favourite coulour is blue because it is the coulour of a dolphin. My favourite coulour is blue because it is the coulour of a ice cream container. My favourite coulour is blue because it is the couler of a lunch box.
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13 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 19, 2015 at 8:10 AM

    Well done Catie on your 5SC post. You have all the capitals and full stops in the right places. You also use a connective to let you add more detail to the sentence.

    Challenge:
    Could you try using some long and short sentences because this makes your writing more interesting. e.g. Blue is the sky. It covers us like a blanket of brightness.

    Allana - teacher from New Zealand, 5SCTeam, http://waka-stride.blogspot.co.nz

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  2. AnonymousMay 19, 2015 at 10:20 AM

    Hi Catie,
    My favourite colour is blue to. I love how you compared the colour blue to dolphins and the sky. Next time u could use commas. :)

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  3. AnonymousMay 19, 2015 at 10:20 AM

    Awsome 5SC one of the best. What is your favourite ice cream? Is Blue your favorite Colour.

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  4. AnonymousMay 19, 2015 at 10:23 AM

    Hey Catie, this is a great 5sc. I love the comparison to a Ice-cream container!
    I am looking forward to seeing your next week challange! :-)
    -Nikita/ Rimu Class

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  5. AnonymousMay 19, 2015 at 10:26 AM

    Hey Catie!
    Great writing, keep it up! I like how you have used a lot of various reasons for why you like blue! Did you know blue can help you stay physically calmer?

    -Isabelle

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  6. AnonymousMay 19, 2015 at 10:37 AM

    Hi Catie!
    My favorite colors is Blue too.
    and also great writing!
    What's your favorite animal?

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  7. Jackie MasonMay 21, 2015 at 3:01 PM

    Well done with this 5SC Catie! You gave many terrific reasons you like your favourite colour. Next time you could try to change your sentences a bit and use the word because less often. Nice job remembering capital letters and periods.
    Mrs. Mason (Kanata, Ontario, Canada!)

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  8. AnonymousMay 28, 2015 at 9:24 AM

    Dolphins are cute I think you should like the colour.Why doesn't it remind you of a rainbow?It makes me see a girl that is swimming in the water with dolphins and the sky is blue!!!!!!!!

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  9. AnonymousMay 28, 2015 at 9:26 AM

    Thanks everyone

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