I have been doing an Metaphor poem on one of my friends at yaldhurst and
Her name is mika and I will leave her learning blog down under and hope you like it
http://ymsmika.blogspot.co.nz/
From
Catie
Mika
1. Mika is a Lollypop
Because she is sweet and kind.
2. She is a Cheetah
Because she can go fast.
3. She is a Director
Because she can make a good role model.
4. She is a rat
Because she is always busy.
5. She is a Helper
Because in class she can help you.
6. She is a Quiet person
Because she is always doing her work Quietly
7. She is a Mum
She is always caring
She is Mika
Nice work Catie. I like the imaginative similes you have used.
ReplyDeleteI am not sure Mika would have liked to be compared to a rat, perhaps a beaver would have been better (they build dams in their rivers to help catch fish)
Dad
Hi Dad
DeleteThank you for thinking of different thing in my Writing. I hope you are busier than a rat (Because you mare a rat.)
Love Catie:P
What an amazing number of features Mika has. I tend to agree with Dad that not everyone has the pleasant associations with a rat that you have. I would love to know how you would describe yourself.
ReplyDeleteI look forward to your next blog post.
Thanks Mr.Robertson
DeleteI am Having some fun with Mika when I play with her and I am enjoying sitting next to her. She can run like the wind.
Catie
Wow what a nice compliment to make about Mika.
ReplyDeleteThanks nik
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