We are learning to write paragraphs
14 / 3 / 2016
Kauri
Yaldhurst Model School
Christchurch
8049
Dear Mr M,
Hi, My name is Catie. I am from Yaldhurst School and you took My group to up conical hill. I would like to thank you for helping out in The cabins.
I enjoyed The hydro sides but The most fun of all was going down The superbowl with you because it went really fast. I remember you falling out of The ring and face planting and going down the shoot before me plus everyone laughing at you and you were jealous of me because you didn’t go down the shoot properly.
I would like to ask a couple of questions. What was your favourite activity? Did you like the accommodation? Did you sleep well? Please leave a comment!!
Write here: Once again I would to thank you for coming and hope you enjoyed camp and hope you come next year. If you love this please comment down below for a shoot out in our next writing post.
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Yours sincerely
Catie
Wow Catie it sounds like you had a great time on camp. Do you feel you may have had too much fun on camp? I like the way your letter is segmented into paragraphs. You have managed to group your ideas in a logical order. Very good use of speech marks. I look forward to your next blog post.
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