I really enjoyed this story Catie although I lost the thread a little by the end. Great imaginative names for your characters. I hope no one ends up anywhere bad in your story. Do you like happy endings? I look forward to your next story and your next blog post.
Hi Catie! Your story was outstanding and really loved it. Oh am by the way, how long did it take you to finish the story because the story is so good that I am sure it took a while. Anyway maybe next you could use lots of interesting words but you already have and the people that are going to check this story, when they see the title they have to see because the title is so interesting
I like the way that your story goes so well with every picture, Catie. It was interesting to read and made me want to find out what happened next. Next Step - use capitals for names. : - )
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I really enjoyed this story Catie although I lost the thread a little by the end. Great imaginative names for your characters. I hope no one ends up anywhere bad in your story. Do you like happy endings? I look forward to your next story and your next blog post.
ReplyDeleteHi Catie! Your story was outstanding and really loved it.
ReplyDeleteOh am by the way, how long did it take you to finish the story because the story is so good that I am sure it took a while. Anyway maybe next you could use lots of interesting words but you already have and the people that are going to check this story, when they see the title they have to see because the title is so interesting
I like the way that your story goes so well with every picture, Catie. It was interesting to read and made me want to find out what happened next. Next Step - use capitals for names. : - )
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